An overhaul and another One-shot.
Not a big overhaul, mind you, but just one for Chapter 18 of “By Will Alone”, the aforementioned chapter that I didn’t like. I’ve re-done it, editing the first half a little and completely re-doing the middle and part of the end. Now I feel better about it. The hard part was that it was from none of the Pevensies’ points of view.
Interestingly enough, while re-writing Chapter 18 I also wrote another one-shot. Surprisingly, it deals with Susan, which is odd because Susan was never one of my favorite characters. It shows how Susan gets to Aslan’s country in the end and is different from my other works. The other three Pevensies make an appearance. A bit inspired by “The Great Divorce” by C.S. Lewis during the second part. It can be read here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4426040/1/Welcome
Enjoy!
